Some one came
knocking
At my wee, small
door;
Someone came
knocking;
I'm sure-sure-sure;
I listened, I
opened,
I looked to left
and right,
But nought there
was a stirring
In the still dark
night;
Only the busy
beetle
Tap-tapping in the
wall,
Only from the
forest
The screech-owl's
call,
Only the cricket
whistling
While the dewdrops
fall,
So I know not who
came knocking,
At all, at all, at
all.
Some One by Walter de la Mare is actually quite a simple poem. The story is straightforward: a person goes to answer a knock at the door but no one is there. This initial simplicity though is one of my favorite things about it. The rhythm and feelings this poem provides insinuates a deeper meaning than is obvious at first. The challenge of this poem was to pinpoint those feelings to discover that meaning. Overall, the poem gives the sense of loneliness and possibly paranoia. The person thinks they hear something, but find that they are alone in a collective forest of sounds. This slow realization of lonesomeness is especially seen in the last two lines of the poem that read, “So I know not who came knocking,/At all, at all, at all.” This repetition reflects back to the earlier repetition in the first part of the poem and furthers the feeling of isolation. I have even interpreted this poem as loneliness is the “person” who is knocking on the door and, when the narrator opens it, the outside exemplifies it with all the distant sounds of the forest.
Walter de la Mare is most known for his children’s poetry as well as his horror stories. I think this poem is a marriage between the two. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem feels like the typical child’s poem, but the paranoia and darkness of the poem gives the impression of something more menacing. Despite the childish structure, I do think this poem can relate the most to adults since the meaning shown is one that is much darker than is seen at first glance. To me, poems are all about the feelings that they give the reader, and I think that is the reason I liked this poem so much.
I love how you first explained the simplicity of the poem and how a cursory reader could a poem such as this like a children's poem. But the way you showed the darker undertones emphasizing loneliness is what really makes this poem intriguing. The repetition really does show the loneliness of the narrator as if he or she is desperately trying to find companionship and I think you pointed that out beautifully.
ReplyDeleteDasha - nice work with this poem, particularly the following reading: " I have even interpreted this poem as loneliness is the “person” who is knocking on the door and, when the narrator opens it, the outside exemplifies it with all the distant sounds of the forest." Insightful, convincing reading.
ReplyDeleteI would this in english im to understand -_-
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